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Post #91
Thanks Matty, this is the sort of feedback I was looking for.
Matty
To clarify; the titles of both 9a and 9b are distracting. To me it's a choice between 8 and 9a, as 9a is just cooler than 9b.
I think the size of the title (fontsize), the closeness to the land and the huge sword are more distracting than the lightning effect.
I think the size of the title (fontsize), the closeness to the land and the huge sword are more distracting than the lightning effect.
Westeros & Essos 9a (click to show)
Westeros & Essos 9b (click to show)
Hyd yn oed er fy mod Cymraeg , dim ond yn siarad Saesneg, felly yr wyf yn gobeithio y bydd y cyfieithu yn gywir.
![[image]](http://www.the-inkstore.co.uk/map_resources/Westeros_Essos9a.jpg)
![[image]](http://www.the-inkstore.co.uk/map_resources/Westeros_Essos9b.jpg)
![[image]](http://www.the-inkstore.co.uk/map_resources/Westeros_Essos10.jpg)
) looking background mountains in 9A. Especially in the Essos territories. But the ones in 10 still look very nice.
![[image]](http://www.the-inkstore.co.uk/map_resources/Westeros_Essos11.jpg)
![[image]](http://www.the-inkstore.co.uk/map_resources/Westeros_Essos_Caps2-5.jpg)
![[image]](http://www.the-inkstore.co.uk/map_resources/Westeros_Essos_Caps6-9.jpg)
![[image]](http://i1354.photobucket.com/albums/q700/Photo_Bishop/Westeros_Essos_caps234_zpsuktx3wra.png)
![[image]](http://i1354.photobucket.com/albums/q700/Photo_Bishop/Westeros_Essos_caps567_zpsbz6hlbhj.png)
![[image]](http://i1354.photobucket.com/albums/q700/Photo_Bishop/Westeros_Essos_caps8_zpsfnyg2bai.png)